From a newspaper editorial:
A decision of food pyramid revision may sound simple to some of us. . . .Too many nouns clustered together. Better:
Changing the food pyramid may seem simple. . . .Link » Other How to improve writing posts, via Pinboard
“To please not call me ‘Doctor’”
From a newspaper editorial:
A decision of food pyramid revision may sound simple to some of us. . . .Too many nouns clustered together. Better:
Changing the food pyramid may seem simple. . . .Link » Other How to improve writing posts, via Pinboard
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